Saturday, May 21, 2011

The Story

I finally have a preview of "the story" the title is still secret for soon the first chapter will be up. Here is the preview!
 "Keith looked at the the shimmering water the sun glistened of it's smooth edges it cascaded through the Cave like an ocean. Why had he dropped the key. There was only one way to get it back, diving. He looked at Peanut for motivation but he just cowered back. Keith was alone on this challenge. He took a step back he felt as if his head was swelling due to the tension build up. Suddenly Peanut bit his leg and he suddenly fell in. The water was cool as it passed onto Keith's face, the tension was dissolving presently. Then he saw it right at the bottom, the beautiful silver key. He only had a small amount of time before he would have to surface so he swam down like a storm shark. He was getting closer and closer till he saw a lightning bolt come straight at him. He swerved and it hit his hip the pain was immense but the sight he saw next was worse. A 10 foot tall kraken was looming near the key. Keith remembered that Liu Dong had said that krakens lurked in the water. Like dragons they hoarded treasure and that was what the key was. Then he realized the kraken sent another lightning bolt at him. It hit him right in the neck. Only then did he realize he was drowning."
See ya in the Spiral!

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